Gold Mouth Shawty.

ha

35 minutes ago, Liquicity said:

ha

Thank you for the constructive criticism. 

cringy as always!

g o t e e

It became tougher to read towards the end but other than that, good job. Not a bad short story.

good read

15 minutes ago, Frezeli said:

good read

Thanks for everyone commenting. I plan on getting another chapter out soon. I'm trying to tie all of this together before the server opens!

tldr

11 hours ago, Akiba said:

tldr

You're in the wrong sub-forum noob.

I'm trying to add images with the aligntables but it's a little funky right now. For the time being the face of the thread is going to be overhauled to be more visually appealing. Just trying to keep all the text in order while I do it is the challenge!

Good luck with it.

2 hours ago, Palmer said:

Good luck with it.

Thanks!

I'm slowly going through and proof-reading the story, trying to polish it up before I continue or else I'd be backlogged with editing. The first three chapter's are proof-read and altered accordingly!

hot asl

25 minutes ago, Apathy said:

hot asl

Thanks for the kind words!

Good shit.

tw1ster with the chapters again...

On 11/22/2017 at 4:26 PM, The Stick-Up Man said:

Good shit.

Thanks for the kind works famo.

10 minutes ago, Infinity said:

tw1ster with the chapters again...

Chapters on chapters on chapters, you know how I do. Thanks for sliding through.

1 minute ago, tw1ster said:

 

Thanks for the kind works famo.

 

 

Chapters on chapters on chapters, you know how I do. Thanks for sliding through.

oh I know, you can reach a whole page full of chapters and that's the slightest you could do ;s

Mr. Blue Benjamin, 2 face the bill

Sky-Dweller Rollie they blue face, the hill

Searching for the narcs she can pull up on the hill

House full of vultures and they clutching on the steel

13 minutes ago, cBull said:

Mr. Blue Benjamin, 2 face the bill

Sky-Dweller Rollie they blue face, the hill

Searching for the narcs she can pull up on the hill

House full of vultures and they clutching on the steel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KsGNRgtKzs

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