Dr. Lucien Smiths

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syler (Member) ·

Dr. Lucien Smiths

Burgess

It wasn't the first time. Lucien had got these 'urges' frequently. He always wondered what it was like, to taste another human's flesh. Multiple times at school Lucien would try in the boy's locker-room, asking fellow classmates to allow him to 'try' them at his house, but never ended up in luck. He was what would be classed as a 'social outcast' along with his classmates, his mother never believed the school no matter how many times they referred Lucien to a psychiatrist. He was the textbook definition of a psychopath: smug, cocky, sadistic and insufferable. As he grew older, it only got worse.. the urges that is. A time arose where Smiths went above and beyond unlike before. A fellow classmate, a female that is.. aged thirteen like Smiths was walking home from school when Smith's couldn't control the urge any longer, so he took it into his own hands. As the female student walked into an alleyway to cut a few blocks and get home quicker, Smith's, instead of taking his normal route home, decided to follow the female in the alleyway. She noticed, of course, she noticed. They always notice before it happens, making it more satisfying, the fact they know their inevitable death is near is what drove Smiths to keep doing it. She turned around, barking at Lucien in an aggressive tone, calling him all the names we heard during our childhood days, 'freak', 'ugly', and such. Smiths used a sharp piece of metal, that he carried with him every day of his school life with the intent of using it soon enough, to stab the student in the temple, killing her almost instantly. Smiths was filled with excitement from the kill, however, knew there wasn't enough time to continue with the job.

 

Years later, Smiths hasn't killed since refraining from doing what he had done back then, it was too close for comfort in Smiths' eyes, an investigation was launched however the police eventually ruled out Smiths' name due to lack of sufficient evidence. That sharp piece of metal, however? He still kept that, secured in a small box buried within his back garden, he never washed the blood off of the blade, he liked to sniff it and lick it, despite the taste and smell is non-existent after multiple years.. he did it anyway. Later on, a second chance came... Lucien was aged twenty-four at the time and still a virgin and without the proper satisfaction of his urges. He decided enough was enough in old Florida and decided to pack his things for San Fierro, however with a lack of money and no work, he bought a small yacht and renovated the interior into a 'laboratory' in where he kept his victims in small, air-tight containers, drying them out before performing necessary 'surgery' on them.


Basic Information

Lucien Smith was born on the 11th of April, 1973 making him aged forty-four. Lucien was a textbook psychopath making him smug, cocky, sadistic and an insufferable human being, however, could be charismatic and charming when the occasion called for it. He is an intelligent man, going about his illegal activities in an extremely methodical manner. Oftenly, Smiths was heavily underestimated by his enemies and was obsessed was fame and respect, making him insanely egotistical. Lucien was a known Satanist, he believed personally he was assisting the Devil with every kill, removing the burdens from the world. Lucien was also considered a clean freak, maybe due to the paranoia of being caught by the police or maybe it was child-hood related. He himself didn't even know, however, he would frequently disinfect his hands and refrain from using his bare hands to do anything whether it be conducting daily duties like making food or even driving the car.


Please refrain from negativity, constructive criticism is welcome. I understand I suck ass with character stories and this is really new to me but I felt.. new server, new opportunities. Luck is needed and welcomed, thank you all for showing even the slightest interest. Yes, before you say it I'm not going to go on a mass-murder spree, all roleplay will be RP'd thoroughly and my intentions are not to promote DM in any way. The character is heavily based off of Lucien Burgess from Luther, in Season One, Episode Three found here.

 

 

syler (Member) ·

Reserved I suppose.

SCANDALOUZ (Member) ·

This is great, finally something to investigate.
(imcomin4u)

King! (Member) ·

good shit

Andrew Bones (Member) ·

something unique, gl 

 

west. (Premium Member) ·

serial killer face

Finch (Member) ·

M’kay, looks interesting so far.

biggus (Member) ·

Well this is a sick fucking bastard if I've ever seen one, well done, my dude. I hope to see more.